A public speaker that I like listening to is Richard Rohr who is a pastor, podcast speaker, and an author. He is known to use extemporaneous outlines or perform a memorized speech. Even though he speaks in a civic model, he engages his audience using pathos and continuously provides an engaging speech through his confidence and his easy-to-follow steady flow of words. I enjoy listening to him because he never fails to teach with excellent organization and makes critical thinking the focal point of his speeches.
Your response sounds very good. I like the way you took what you learned from the text and included it in your response. I think pastors are good at what they do when it comes to their speech.